THE NIGHT THAT WON'T DAWN💀💀💀 - 7 months ago

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WRITTEN BY : CHIDIEBELE OJUANU

INTRO:
WRITER'S P.O.V
          
          The night cloud looking dark and cloudy like there's going to be a mighty downpour. The presence of cold laid vividly across the streets in the form of snow with every window shut. It seems like the stars and moon up high had gone to take shelter from the cold.
          Jane Thomas sleeping on the couch, her cellphone on the table starts ringing.
 "uhmm" Jane says as she yawns tiredly stretching out for her phone. "Hey" She said picking up


  "Hi, I've been calling but you weren't picking up. Is everything alright?" Damien Kurt sounded from the other end.
  " I'm sorry, I think I fell asleep on the couch. I'm so worked out" She said yawning again.
" Sorry about that... Uhmm so that means you aren't dressed up yet?" Damien sounded curious.
" Dressed?....For what?" Jane said trying to recollect.
"We agreed on going out today and you said I should come pick you up by 6pm" Damien filled in as Jane rubbed her left thumb against her forehead.
"Goodness me.... Is it 6pm already?" She exclaimed checking her wristwatch..." Geez, it's past 6 and I didn't even show up for a minute at the party Greg is holding, what are we going to do now? Shall we shift it please?" She said walking out of the sitting room to the hallway. The light in the hallway blinking oddly.

"How many times will you keep asking for a shift?" He said in disappointment.
" Why is everywhere quiet? Is the party over? She couldn't have left without telling me besides, it's still too early for the party to end.." Jane said within herself with a slight squeeze on her forehead as she opens the door which gave a loud creak.
" Damien?" She called almost in a whisper as he takes few steps into a big hall with dim light going on and out at intervals of ten seconds.
"Why are you suddenly sounding like that? Are you sure you're okay Jane?" Damien said in a worry.
" No.... It's just that..." She stops as a strong wind blows causing the window blinds to shutter. Jane looks in fright as a shadow passed by her swiftly.
"Jane...Talk to me, what's going on?" He said almost in a fatherly tone. The shadow passes by Jane again as her eyes flutters fearfully.

"Help me, please" A faint voice rang in somewhere close to where Jane was standing motionlessly.
"I'm beginning to hear things" Jane said in a wry laugh sounding more like a trembling voice.
"Please help" The faint voice came again.
"Who's there?...Guys,if this is a prank please stop, it's not getting funny" She said in a skipping tone. " Jesus" Jane shouts as somebody holds her right leg with bloody hand.
"Jane!" Damien voice rang in again.
"Run. He's coming"....The person said in a scary but frightful tone.
"Wh...Who?" Jane stammered trying to wrap her head around what was going on. The person holding her hand was about to talk when Jane eyes landed on a huge shadow looking like that of a human being. Her heart sank in as she felt someone's presence right behind her. Jane turns her head slowly only to see a pair of red looking eyes staring back into hers in the dark hall. Her eyes landed slowly on the mouth dripping with blood and two beastly looking fangs.

"Ahhhh" Jane screams as she falls.

ANOTHER SCENE
   Jane runs towards a open door, the door got shut immediately she got there.
"Open this door, open the door.... It's coming for me" She bangs on the door furiously with tears streaming down her face. She hears heavy steps approaching, she looks back and then back to the door.
"Don't do this to me, it's coming for me" She continues banging. "He's here" She said within herself as she stops banging on the door and turns slowly to the figure standing before her in the dark.
 "Noooooo" Jane screams loudly.

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